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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Snowdance

    i liked it. of course, the fact that "girls suck" kinda hurt me a little, but im getting past that. on the first line, i think you should add at ...

    Mar 26, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Bloom of the Rose

    This poem was amazing....even though i didn't quite understand all of what you were saying. The whole Shakespearean theme was a good choice for this. This is a very complexly ...

    Mar 26, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Threnody

    This is a really good poem. It leaves the reader to figure out what you're talking about as they read it, and then at the end, you still don't really ...

    Mar 26, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Torture

    wow. now i feel normal. im not the only one who writes really good scary poems. yay! *jumps around and doesnt feel crazy anymore* i like teh end rhymes in ...

    Mar 23, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Do you see me?

    oh my gosh. im crying! that is so full of emotion. and its how i feel all the time. im so sorry if thats how you feel too. its very ...

    Mar 23, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: To Society:

    ok, im not going to get into my religion either. cuz then i would be sitting here arguing about it for teh rest of eternity and a day. but let ...

    Mar 23, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Of An Icy Chandelier

    wow. someone either must've made you very mad, and you were pretending that was them, or you have an amazing imagination. i love it. the last line is my favorite. ...

    Mar 23, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Water and Glass

    for someone who claims to have never written poetry before, that was really good. but what does it mean? every time i was reading it i kept on thinking that ...

    Mar 23, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Blue Lightning's Light

    i really liked this. but i have a few questions about the words you used in the.....fourth stanza, what does vivacious mean? and then in teh second-to-last one, does eulogies ...

    Mar 23, 2009


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